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Hindus

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Interesting!

 

It's suggestive but not exactly "filthy".

The camera focus drifts away near the end but that might add to the effect of tension building to the climax.

 

The only thing I suggest is to have a better ending. There needs to be a climax or a "punch line."

At the end, the screen could suddenly go black then fade to a picture of a fur clad woman smoking a cigarette.

 

Other than that, very good!

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WOW! that's the best one so far. You defiantly have to go to xtube, before this one gets pulled too. " title="Applause" />

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Your photography has gotten much better!

 

Your use of natural lighting looks a lot better.

Your control of the camera's auto-focus has improved a lot.

 

Nice work!

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